
No one else has a scheduled excerpt for this morning, so I thought it would be a good chance for me to share something a bit different with you guys. Two short scenes from my latest novel, That Darkest Place. While it is very difficult to find scenes from this book that don’t contain spoilers, I managed to include a funny one (probably my favorite little moment in the whole book, because, for the town’s premiere ladies’ man, Forrest Painter is amazingly inept when it concerns love), and a more serious one, as Jackson makes a decision guaranteed to upset his younger brother. Thanks for reading, and I hope the first one makes you smile, and the second one makes you curious.
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Scene from CH 26, Already in Jeopardy, edited slightly to remove spoilers, and containing some mild profanity. Jackson Painter, his middle brother, Forrest, and their respective love interests are seated around the kitchen table, ready to clean up a pretty bad mess caused by the latest disaster to befall Jackson. The previous evening, Jackson had given Forrest a very stern talking to about Forrest’s fear of proposing to Bailey Hunt. Jackson had flatly ordered Forrest to go straight to Bailey’s house, get down on one knee, ask the question, and not to come home again until he’d done so. But Jackson has just noticed that Bailey is not wearing the ring Forrest has had in his pocket for two weeks. This is what follows, told from Forrest’s point of view.
Excerpt 1 from CH 26 of That Darkest Place
Rising, Jackson spoke to Mel and Bailey. âIf you two will excuse us a minute, I have something I need to show Forrest. Help yourself to breakfast and more coffee, Bailey. Thereâs enough for all of us.â
Jackson crunched his way down the hall to his bedroom, not glancing back even once. With a sigh of dread, Forrest followed, but as soon as he reached Jacksonâs room, he knew it would have been safer if heâd stayed where he was.
His brotherâs arms were crossed over his chest, brows drawn so close together, they had essentially become a monobrow. His whisper was harsh. âI canât help noticing thereâs no ring on Baileyâs finger, Forrest. Care to tell me why that is? Because Iâm pretty sure she wouldnât be here right now if sheâd turned you down.â
Forrestâs tongue felt glued to the roof of his mouth. âWell, umm âŚ.â
âWell what? You didnât ask her?â
He shook his head. âNo, butââ
âDonât give me âbut.â Didnât you get what I was telling you last night?â
âYes. I did get it, Jackson. I might be a damn chicken, but Iâm not totally stupid! And I was gonna ask her, butââ
âThere you go again.â
Jackson scrubbed his hand over his face, and Forrest knew heâd disappointed him. He hated how that felt, especially when it really wasnât his fault.
âListen. I was gonna ask her as soon as I got to her house, butâI mean, thenâwe , ah, well, we kinda got distracted.â
âShe twisted your arm again, I guess?â
âSort of. It was more like we were both twistinâ each otherâs arms, and before you know it, we were in bed again. I figured Iâd ask her right afterward, except there wasnât one.â
âWasnât one what? An after? Whatâs that supposed to mean?â
âIt means we were hornier than we were hungry. We never left her bed, and after the third or fourth time, we fell asleep.â
Jacksonâs eyebrows leapt for the ceiling, and his mouth dropped open. âThird or fourth, Forrest? Fourth?â
Sure he was on safer ground now, Forrest nodded. âWell, yeah. You know how it is, right?â
Mouth still agape, Jackson finally shook his head. âNo, I donât know how that is. Iâm pretty sure Iâd remember an evening like that, no matter how long ago it was. Four times, thatâs what youâre saying?â
âYeah, I think so. I mean, who counts? But the point is, you donât stop in the middle of something like that, even to propose. I figured Iâd do it later. And then we fell asleep. And then you called. And then, well ⌠you know the rest. But Iâm gonna ask her. I thought hard about what you said, and you were right. I canât afford not to go for it, not if this is what I really want, and it is.â
He had no idea why Jackson was still staring at him, but after a long moment, his brotherâs expression changed from stunned and skeptical, to affectionately amazed, and as Jackson turned to go back to the kitchen, Forrest heard him mutter, âSon of a bitch. Four!â
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Scene 2 from CH 26, Already in Jeopardy. This one takes place after Jackson and Forrest have returned to the kitchen able.
Excerpt #2 from CH 26 of That Darkest Place
Jackson had hoped to talk to Forrest alone first, but no postponing this decision now. He dropped into his seat, dug out a breakfast sandwich, and popped the lid off one of the cups of coffee, aware that three sets of eyes watched his every move. Taking a long swallow of the now-cool coffee, he nodded at Bailey. âThatâs my plan. Forrest, I hate to do this to you, but I donât have a choice, here. Iâm moving out.â
Forrest exploded out of his chair. âNo! You donât have to do that, Jackson.â
âYou know I do. Please donât make this any harder than it already is.â
Forrest sank back down.
âMe being here at night is dangerous. That beautiful big truck out there is a neon sign, advertising to the whole town that Iâm home. Itâs putting a bullseye on this apartment, on me, and worst of all, on you.â
His voice dropped an octave. âI canât be the reason anyone else dies, Forrest. Please tell me you understand that?â
Struggling with the obvious truth, his brotherâs protests slowed. Stricken and miserable, he grudgingly gave in. âItâs not fair. Weâre just gettinâ our lives back to normal again, and now youâre leavinâ? I hate this.â
âIâm not leaving. But Iâm not going to sleep here every night and let a crazy idiot take potshots at us. Whatâs next? Molotov cocktails? Pipe bombs? I canât do this, Forrest. I donât want to die at this guyâs hands, and I damn well donât want anyone else to, either.â
âWhat are you planninâ to do, then?â
âStill working on that, but I figure I can stay at different motels for a while, at least. Maybe down in DeBary or Sanford. Give the police a chance to see if they can catch this ass. It doesnât have to be forever. Surely heâll slip up somewhere.â
Frustration close to boiling over, Forrest glared at the table. Bailey reached for his hand, the love in her eyes, obvious. âForrest, heâs right. If Jackson canât be found, he canât be attacked. And thatâs safer for both of you.â
Unconvinced, Forrest scowled. âBe damned if I want my brother livinâ out of a suitcase at a cheap motel, because some lunatic is determined to hurt him. Itâs not right!â
Jackson laid a hand on his brotherâs arm. âNo, itâs not right. Itâs not fair to either of us. But for now, letâs be careful. Weâll hope for answers soon, so they can put this guy away.â
Mel cleared her throat. âExcuse me? Could I suggest something? I might have a possible solution.â
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Marcia Meara, Author
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