October Writing Prompt Challenge by Eldon Brown

Hi, Eldon.  I took the liberty of moving your October challenge entry to its own post, so folks will see it. (It was lost beneath another conversation.) Thanks for taking part, and this is terrific!


There was something strange about the barista. True, this was Japan but he was strange. Ordinary Japanese don’t display tattoos. They are considered vulgar and only circus folk and yakuza have them. I stepped to the service counter, grabbed a few napkins, and sprinkled some cinnamon on the steaming surface of my coffee. I love the smell of cinnamon, especially when mixed with the wonderful aroma of rich, strong coffee. I turned and faced the barista. He was so close that I accidentically spilled some hot coffee on his hand, causing him to drop the knife.

8 thoughts on “October Writing Prompt Challenge by Eldon Brown

  1. “I’m so sorry,” I said as I tried to blot the coffee on his hand. “That’s ok,” said the barista. “I thought you might need a plastic knife to spread the cream cheese on your bagel.”

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