Twice lately, I have been pulled right out of a story I was reading by the phrase “baited breath,” and I realized this is a mistake far too many people are making. One does not have “baited breath” unless one has been eating worms or shiners. Honest.
The correct word in this case is “bated,” as in “abated” meaning something that has ceased happening. Like breathing. In other words, the phrase “bated breath” means someone is holding his breath, whereas to say “baited breath” implies someone has very odd dining habits.
The Serious Example:
The accused murderer awaited the jury’s verdict with bated breath. (He was holding his breath).
The Silly example:
The cat ate every shiner in the pail and ended up with baited breath. (The cat now smells fishy.)
Hope this helps sort out the difference between bated and baited. (But I’m not holding my breath here. 😀 )
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DISCLAIMER:
I am not an English teacher, grammarian, or expert on all matters of this nature, but I promise I have consulted with those who are before posting anything in this series.
Hee hee. Yes, English spelling can really trip one up! Thanks for the laugh.
BTW – I finished The Emissary last night, reviewed this morning. 🙂 I just had to run over here and tell you what a great read it was. Well done. 🙂
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English spelling, indeed. 😀 Always tricky, so it pays to be extra careful. Plus, there are those times when you actually do know the difference, but your fingers don’t, and type the wrong word, anyway. 😯
Oooh, I’m so happy to hear you enjoyed The Emissary! I’ll be checking your review shortly, and thank you for it most gratefully. I’m 90% of the way through “Sunwielder” and just amazed at your take on time travel. It’s a terrific story and I do love Gryff! Can’t wait to see how it turns out! 😀
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It was a joy to read, Marcia. And I’m so glad you’re enjoying Sunweilder. Yippee! 🙂
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I really am, and I’m desperately trying to figure out where Gryff is going to end up. Or should I say “when?” It’s great!
And I just read your review of The Emissary. It’s lovely, thank you, and I’m so pleased it pulled you in. As for Jake & Dodger’s relationship, the real growth occurs in The Emissary 2: To Love Somebody, right along with their ever-expanding strengths. Still plenty of laughs and plenty of tears, I think, with a side order of tongue in cheek. 😀 Hope you get a chance to read it. Like the first one, you can finish it in an evening.
Speaking of finishing tonight, I’m hoping to finish Sunwielder, before I go crazy from curiosity! 😀 Will let you know if I manage to accomplish that. ❤
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I noticed when I was posting the review that there was another one. Lucky Me!
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Hope you’ll get a chance to see what those two are up to, along with their boss, Azrael, of course. There will be one more, and then I’ll combine the three so I can offer them as a set in print, too. I just have such a good time writing them. 😀
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Sounds like a plan, Marcia. 🙂
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A slice of humour does wonders to fix things in the memory! Thanks 😀
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Sort of akin to a spoonful of sugar, huh? 😀 I agree, Trish. Learning something new doesn’t have to be tedious and boring. Why not get a smile out of the lesson, too? The original post had a LOT of responses, and some of them were funnier than the post. You can check out the comments here, if you like: https://marciamearawrites.com/2017/07/14/whywritewrong-baited-vs-bated/ ) Had a great discussion with Craig Boyack, too. 😀
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Reblogged this on Chris The Story Reading Ape's Blog.
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Thanks so much for sharing, Chris! 🙂 ❤
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Thank YOU for the article, Marcia – wrongly spelled words distract me as well 😱
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I know. I have a real problem with that. It is distracting, and once in a while, truly annoying, especially if repeated again and again. Not that I’m an expert, but if I notice it and am pulled out of the story because of it, other readers will be, too, and that’s not something we want. 😦 Better if we all keep learning and improving, I think. 🙂
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Yep 👍
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The cat example clears up everything, Marcia, lol.
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Oh, good, Teri! Glad you saw the true importance of that example! 😀 😀 😀
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I haven’t used the phrase yet but I’m ready to use it the right way when the time comes.
Thank you for the tip.
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Yay. I’m hoping a lot of folks will find it useful, Darnell! Thanks for letting me know. 🙂
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I love the humor you injected into this post, Marcia. So much fun while pointing out a common error!
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I’d much rather make learning fun than make it a chore, so I’m glad you feel that way, Mae. It’s how I remember things like this, myself. 😀 Thanks for stopping by, as I slowly start to get these things going again. ❤
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Great examples!! People get this one wrong a lot!!
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Thanks, Darlene. And I agree, this is an error I see way too often. Glad you like it. Which reminds me, I made a graphic for this feature. I’d better go find it and put it to use! 😀
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Great, Marcia, beautifully explained with humour to help it stick. I don’t know what shiners are but I’m guessing some kind of small fish?
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Good guess, Mary. They are small bait fish, very silvery, hence the name. 🙂 And most bait shops sell them as just that: shiners. I’m glad you enjoyed it, and for me, humor is almost always the best way to get a message across. The original post garnered a TON of replies and long conversations, so I figured it would be a good one to pull from the archives to start the ball rolling. 🙂 ❤
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Bahahahaha! Baited breath…. oh boy. I was at a meeting the other day and the lady was talking about singing without music… she said, ‘you know, singing archipelago’…
I barely made it out without dying of laughter.
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OMG, I’m not sure I could have kept a straight face! That’s hilarious! But hopefully, she hasn’t put it in a book somewhere. I fully understand using the wrong word or mispronunciation of words in daily speech (though it can still be funny). We all do it now and then. But when it occurs in a published book, it’s a whole ‘nuther matter. And I’m kind of shocked at how many errors I’m seeing lately, even by Big Name (capital letters) writers.
But again. I would have struggled to keep from laughing during your meeting, too. 😀 😀 😀
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It’s usually a book deal-breaker for me. I’m very fussy with what I read. While baited breath probably wouldn’t have made me put it down, a whole ‘nuther matter would have (or ‘would of’… another peeve) 🤗
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Ha. A whole ‘nuther matter is southernese idiom. Many of my characters use/have used the phrase, because it’s very common down here. But it would only show up in dialogue. On the other hand, baited breath is enough to make me stop cold every time I see it. If I’m already in love with the book, I might let it slide, because otherwise, there are so many things like that out there, I’d soon have nothing to read. 😀 How much I’m willing to overlook usually depends on how much pleasure the book or characters are already giving me. But it will definitely pull me out of the story and have me wondering about the writer AND the editor.
I’ll be sharing a couple of others I see more often than ought to be the case, so stay tuned. I’m looking forward to seeing what you think. 😀 (And boo, hiss to “would of.” 😦 )
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Reblogged this on Author Don Massenzio and commented:
Check out this helpful post from The Write Stuff blog that helps us sort out a frequently misused phrase.
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As always, you are the KING of sharing, Don! Thanks so much for passing this along. You already know, but I’ll say it again: I appreciate it greatly! 🙂
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LOL! There are some others that throw me for a loop as well (and of course I can’t think of them right now…)
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I’ll be posting a few more from the archives, Julie. Maybe they’re there! 😀 I can’t be the only one noticing some of these, I know! Glad this one made you laugh. 🙂
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